Rough Cut 1 Feed Back

I have recieved feedback from a range of people, overall i have recieved feedback from 5-6 people but i hope to increase this number when i recieve more views on the video on youtube (from college students within my class etc)


Shown below are the comments I recieved and also whom said them:


Paula ( Mother ) : "I love the way you have made it look all wierd, by making Alison jump / jitter from one point to another, very good!"


Paul (Father ) : "Really good music and the effects reflect the lyricks well, overall very impressive video & song!"


Lee (brother / on-set photographer) : "I really like this video! I dunno what it is about it, but i felt everything just worked well together and made a brilliant video!"


Pete (Teacher) : "Wow, This video reminds me of Bjorks music video by Michel Gondry! The footage used in yout music video is almost exactly the same as Bjorks music video 'Bachelorette'!. Very good video only needs a few adjustments here and there!"


Nick (Teacher) : "The fades work well within the video and add to the old fasioned look of the video, overall a good music video, I would suggest adding a few more colours and some effects to bring it out a bit more, but overalll very good music video"


Alison (Artist) :

( here is a screen grab of the email i recieved from the artist - Alison )
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After looking back over the feedback I have recieved from people, I will now go back over my rough cut for Crystal Poison and make amendments where needed in the sequence. After doing the suggested fixes to my music video i will then save / export it as another rough cut so I can make sure i get the best possible video done for the final cut version of the music video for the song Crystal Poison by Alison.