Feedback on Pitch 1 & 2

Overall the feedback that i received from both the class and Pete was mostly positive with some negative points, such as the lip-sync issue and also the fact of the video becoming to boring for the audience.

Shown below are the positive comments i received for both pitches:

- Good thought for video and effects (black & white -> colour)

- Choices of locations are good and well thought through

- Organization work so far is well thought out

Shown below are the negative points i received for my pitches:

- Not a good idea to have no singing / lip-syncing in the music video

- May get a bit boring for the audience as it seems like one long shot / journey

- The idea for the colour changing effect may not work

- Artist needs to be confident and needs to perform the song within the video not just act

Improvements for my pitches / ideas :

- Keep the footage interesting

- use a variety of camera shots / angles during the shoot

- Artist needs to perform her best to make it believable during lip-sync

- Lip-sync is a must for at least some points during the music video

- Need to use more references in my blog to improve ideas for effects / camera angles

Pitch i will use for the music video:

Based on what i have received in ways of feedback from pete and my fellow class mates i am going to merge both pitch 1 and pitch 2. I am going to use a mix of the effects and see what works out best, but i am going to keep in mind that i don't want to over complicate the video during the filming / editing stages of the production.